Pipe people…continued…

This particular piece has given me a great deal of fun. I allowed it to be itself but as usual I tend to over work things and end up with a ‘where’s Wally Picture’ or  can’t see the woods for the trees, so to speak.

I decided to put the piece of poetry so that it overtakes the picture  because the pipe people are calling for help and telling the reader to look for them but I am not so sure it works. Any feedback is most welcome. The piece is in a landscape journal and unfortunately I can’t figure out how to scan and join the pages. Any clues on that would be appreciated as well. So you have to imagine an even flow to the entire piece.

 

 

 

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One thought on “Pipe people…continued…

  1. This is very interesting and creative one. I just want to say I would like to keep watching this, what would be at the end. Thank you dear Rose, with my love, nia

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